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Malia
Interesting story idea. Maybe try getting a clearer picture next time.
Tony
Nice work laying out the internal and external features, as well as what they want. One thing I don't yet understand is why they want to steal the jewel, and how that goal is connected to their features.
Archer
You have created a really interesting character! I am also interested in finding out more about the detective. Do the characters have a backstory with each other, have they interacted before? I look forward to seeing more!
Angelina
This is an interesting idea for a story! I'm interested to find out how they outsmart the detective. Great job!
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Passions are ones that should be acted on
This is where the special thanks would go! I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.
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