Natalie

The idea is amazing, although I feel like there should be more than 1 drawing.

Patrick

I love the idea of a crocodile vampire. If you want the audience to fully understand the George's redemption arc, it's probably worth establishing the extent of George's exploitation. Even the one drawing that you had invoked so much emotion; you're on the edge of greatness.

Mia

I really like this character! he's really funny, but I do wonder why he was mean in the first place. I think that you should maybe put in some more drawings to help tell the story (like him getting lost in the hurricane I think would be a good scene that I can picture)

Jack

I like the character and the voice-over. I am left feeling that the proper punishment has been dolled out and I am happy that George has to learn to be a better person. I think that the moral of the story is don't be arrogant and judgemental. In the future, I would love more than one frame of artwork though I am looking forward to your final product.

Julian

This story evoked a feeling of satisfaction that he was bitten by the bat but also sadness that he was shunned. The moral of this stiry seems to be to not take advantage of and criticize others.

Kevin

Love the design of the crocodile and the description of him.

Madeline

This is super funny! I wonder why the crocodile was mean in the first place? Maybe add some more exposure of the character at the beginning. Great job! :)