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Samantha (1 like)
I really like your toy bird idea! Even from the initial concept alone, I can feel the emotional struggle and immense longing from this bird. It makes me wonder about what this toy bird is willing/going to do to fulfill its dreams. I think there is a lot to explore, and I can't wait to see what you come up with!
Enkhee
Thank you Samantha!
Pietro (1 like)
My favorite one is the one about the toy bird. I love the instant struggle, I imagine the bird looking outside the window and seeing other birds. It reminds me of Pinocchio. I wonder if the bird's winds are stuck to his/her body and it's not just a bird, but he can't even spread his wings. Or maybe he has wings but they are broken. Maybe he can run out of battery in case he needs one. Since you described it as "my toy bird" maybe this is about leaving the owner of the you as well, so the bird has a dilemma.
Enkhee
Hi, thanks. I love how you imagined the scene. Like a porcelain bird staring out the window...
Dariush (1 like)
I like the bird idea. Very cute and opens up for scenarios in the plot.
I wonder more about the cookware idea. Is there anything else the cookware can do?
The cookware idea as we don't know how the cookware operates by hearing someone sing.
Enkhee
Hi Dariush,
Thank you for the feedback! Singing works like a spell. And the cookware comes to life and cooks. Like there will be a RARE SPICE that bothers other cookware, like "add me, add me" or something like that. And of course, the arrogent SALT SHAKER.
Álvaro (1 like)
Hi! I feel like the toy bird wanting to fly as the real birds do, would be such a cute thing to watch. I'm wondering... Maybe he couldn't fly by itself, cause wings are attached/molded on the body, But what if the owner tries some air sport so he can make the toy accomplish it's dream :) Also for the Cookware Idea: Does it serves if I spend all day playing some good ópera pieces for it to heard ? what if he cooks differently depending on the genre?
Best Greetings :)
Enkhee
Hi Alvaro,
Thank you. You gave me a funny idea. Like A MOM cooks spaghetti by singing an Italian song. Suddenly, from the upstairs, her SON plays rock music. And the COOKVAREs hear it and cook the mess-up food. Or a GUY takes a singing class. . because he has a date tonight. Or other MOM cooks for the family union. Like a real American southern family reunion. Every ladies bring their own receipts, and the MOM will struggle.
Alia (1 like)
The toy bird sounds adorable because I love the idea of inanimate objects wanting to be alive and real, like Pinocchio.
It's unclear what type of cookwear you'd want to sing for. An oven? Microwave? Pan?
I do wonder what kind of singing would you need to do in order for the cookware to work. It'd be funny if you could only sing opera or rap for it to function.
Enkhee
Hi Alia,
Thanks for the feedback. You just gave me another idea. Like a BOY who wants to learn to cook. For that, he needs to learn to sing. But the problem is, he sings badly. Then begins a journey to learn to sing well. And he achieved it, and in the end, he became an excellent CHEF.
Emma
My favorite What If idea would be the toy bird wanting to fly with the actual birds because it seems like a good underdog story that would have me root for the toy bird to achieve their dreams. It makes me wonder how the bird is alive and if they would ever be able to fly because of how heavy toys are. It is unclear, however, how the toy bird is sentient or why they would like to fly with actual birds.
Enkhee
Hi, Emma. Thanks. I was questioning a lot too. There are many possibilities. One of them, the kid would change the bird's body part into the light parts suitable for flying piece by piece. Also maybe the owner would find out how this bird was alive when changing the body parts. something like that.
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What if ... Enni :)
What if I had a cookware that cooks when I sing? I wonder what will it cook when I have a soar throat? :(
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