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Matthew

I really like the idea of children being able to travel and visit each other in dreams! I wonder how they would communicate with each other? Is there some sort of universal language they all speak in the dream world? Great idea to explore!

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Kwong Yue (2 likes)

My favourite idea is the kids visiting in the dream world. Makes me wonder: if they are themselves or if they have special powers? If they are bullied in real life - would their bully be there also? How do they find each other and how would they communicate in different languages? What happens to our normal dreams? Do the kids remember the next day? What is unclear to me is how does this happen, is there an age limit, why doesn't this happen for adults?

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Antonio

Thanks Kwong! - We went for the trees idea but I will definitely explore this one for a subsequent project. I really appreciate your feedback!

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Philip

My favorite idea was definitely the dream world idea. It make me wonder if they look the same in the dream world, or if they work like video game avatars and get to be whatever they can dream up. I think the biggest point that isn't clear to me yet is what the dream world is like!

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Samuel

My favorite idea was if people could visit each other in dreams.
It makes me wonder if maybe it could cause kids to have the same nightmares, making it sometimes be a bad thing, but it would be interesting.
I think it was straight forward and easy to understand the concept, especially with it showing what it would look like.

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Chuck (2 likes)

I like all the ideas but will explore the trees one. Are the trees trying to get a message out to the people? Are people listening or not paying enough attention? Are the trees sick of global warming? Are the trees offering a solution that people are not seeing to a problem?

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Jamie (1 like)

I think two could be a really cool concept. What would the trees say? Would the characters save the trees from something? What would be the purpose of bring able to hear the trees?

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Angelina

I love your animation style, its so fun! All of your ideas are really interesting, the kids visiting each other in their dreams really intrigued me. Is there an entirely different world outside of space and time that can only be accessed by kids when they sleep? Being able to understand trees is such an interesting idea. If they can communicate with us, can they also feel fear and pain? The internet crashing would have such devastating ramifications! A story centering around that idea has so many different paths it could take! Great job!

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Antonio , Atul, Gerardo, Kwong Yue, Yza

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