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Amy
I like your idea about the rubber ducky. It gives me childhood memories of fearing the shower drain. How would the duck come to life? What's their personality? It would be nice to see clarification on how the boy would fit in the shower drain and how he's able to breathe with all of the water around. Nice job!
Maya
We liked your second idea. It makes us curious about what the story would be like. Good luck!
Eli
I love these ideas! I think that having a denture tap dance competition could be hilarious and a great way to make explanations for things that go missing! These could make amazing stories!
Alexa
My favorite "What if" idea was the person trying to outlive time. It makes me wonder how the mechanics of the hourglass (how the sand fills up, if it ever flips, how big the hourglass is, what the outside looks like) and time itself works (what part of time will be shown in the hourglass, how to outlive it, etc). The ending gets cut off a little bit, but besides that, I think your ideas were clear.
Tamar
My favorite idea is the rubber duck one because it's playful and fun but full of possibilities!
I wonder more about the person who got trapped in the hourglass... how did they get stuck there?
I'm a little confused about the final what if—I think the audio got cut off at the end.
James
These ideas can work but my favorite is the dentures because the idea sounds silly on paper it can work with great execution.
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WHAT IF...?
What if a child's rubber duckie came to life? What if a person got trapped in a sand timer? What if dentures left their owners' mouths at night and formed a tap-dancing club?
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