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Kervin
good job I like the idea
David
I like the way you introduce fictional characters with realistic events and problems. You have great drawings and detail to go along with the story! Keep the same art style as it looks amazing! How do they overcome the challenges that make them so sad? Why do they put all their trust in others and how does their relationships with them change after realizing that they can be independent? Something I would suggest would be to be more detailed on how the dance goes and how it changes their overall view on choices they let others make for them? Fantastic Job!
Lila
I like the concept, I feel like you should add more minor beats. The one question I have is how did the dance go? Did everyone do what they wanted?
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Story Spine
story spine and moral
This is where the special thanks would go! I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.
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