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Aries

this was a cool idea but a little hard to understand

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Dylan

I like how although I didn't see act 1 I was still able to somewhat understand what was going on. However, I was confused as to what that blue thing was in the video. Next time speak a little bit louder.

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Fernando

Great Work Good Job

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Israel

Cool sketches and interesting story.

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Sugey

excellent work

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Braden

I like the story a lot, but this seems more like a rough draft of a final product. What I mean by that is it would be nice if you could add a lot more descriptions rather than mostly dialogue. Overall, it was a good start!

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Finn

I’m a little confused on the middle place? How did the spirits get there? Are the spirits used to be humans ?

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Kevin

Nice drawings, are those hand drawn elements that are incorporated in them?

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Alejandro

i really like the plot make me want a full movie of this.

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Mila

Your story is wonderful and I like the drawings you did, but I was confused about what the in-between world is, what are the spirits and where did they come from, and how did the spirit king find the magical gem?

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Act 1+2 storyreel.

This is act two

Mrs Barton who inspired me to do this and pushed me to make my story better.

Also my classmates who reviewed my storyreel and gave me valuable feedback.

Special Thanks:

Team:
Ash

Celsa, Sam

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