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Hally Bellah-Guther

Wow! Great questions and suggestions! Much appreciated Danielle!

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Malachi (3 likes)

I like the idea of animals learning to read. I wonder if they would form a society from it with schools businesses and entertainment. These ideas were all clear to me👍.

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Hally Bellah-Guther

Nice feedback and ideas Malachi! Thank you!

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Danielle (3 likes)

What if a teacher helped animals to read in the forest? It makes me wonder if this teacher had special powers with animals. How did she get to that space of teaching animals? Did she learn it from parents? Does she have the ability to work with all animals? Like strays? I'm not sure why animals need to read. Does it help them to become bigger and better than the human race? Do animals end up taking over the world?

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Hally Bellah-Guther

Wow! Great questions and suggestions! Much appreciated Danielle!

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Jackie (3 likes)

What if a teacher taught animals to read in the forest? That's a cute idea! Will it help them to understand humans more? Will it help them to develop as a species? Will it help them to be able to communicate with humans? Will their "animal nature" begin to change? Will they become more docile & domesticated, even in the forest? Does that mean the teacher can also speak to animals in their language? Will it create another language, combining animal & human language? Will people only want pets with this skill? So many possibilities. Look forward to seeing your video idea unfold. Kind regards from Hawaii =) #4Tissimo

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Hally Bellah-Guther

Jackie, you have a great mind and imagination, thanks so much for your feedback and ideas!

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Charles (3 likes)

my favorite is number 3.
roller skating in venice beach sounds like a really fun time!
it makes me wonder where the lion cubs got the idea to go roller skating from, how they started.
are they frequent skaters wishing to make a cross country trip to the animal kingdoms biggest skate party?
can the lion cubs do any tricks?
it’s unclear:
- how the lion clubs know one another
- if their wish is attainable
- do humans still exist in this world
- is skating common for lions?

I really look forward to seeing what idea you go with and how it comes together! Great work!

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Hally Bellah-Guther

Charles, thanks so much for your thoughtful questions, feedback, and ideas! All excellent!

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Yessenia (3 likes)

I love your creativity! My favorite one was the one about lion cubs skating. It interested me because I wonder what caused them to desire that wish. I wonder if they live in a world where only lions exist. I wonder if they are prohibited from skating. I wonder if they are the only lions who are interested in skating. Something that I would find more clarifying would be why the lion cubs are interested in skating. I would like to see what is so motivating for them.

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Hally Bellah-Guther

Yessenia, thanks I really appreciate your feedback and questions! Very helpful! :)

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3 What Ifs for The Disco Divas, OTEC/AFCC Group 6

Ballerinas, Animals that read and Roller Skating Lion Cubs

Special Thanks: Pixar

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The Disco Divas

Hally Bellah-Guther, Morgan, Tea, Yolanda

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