Layne

Yoooo I really like the idea of the spirits who help guide the outcome of people's lives. It would be very interesting seeing the dynamic of a problematic drunk spirit influencing the main character in comparison to the almost angelic counterparts. You can even make it more satirical and make the spirits shaped like a "spirit animal" and tie in the stereotypes of that with their everyday behaviors. I think this concept has been done before with movies like Soul and even Big Mouth with "hormone monsters" but I believe that with more context and individual creative aspects it could be something extremely unique and very entertaining.

Jenny

My favorite idea was the one about spirit guides because I feel like everyone could use a mentor to help improve their life. It makes me wonder about how the people would feel less alone in certain situations but could also be overwhelmed by their guides at some points if they are always with them and giving them advice every second. It is unclear whether or not these spirit guides can be seen by everyone in this world and how these magical guides are assigned to each person. I wonder about the complexity of the one person's drunk guide, is the guide a character similar to Haymitch from the Hunger Games who is drunk and may seem unwilling to help at first but is actually very complex and goes on to play a huge positive role in his mentees' lives or will this guide stay the same throughout the whole story?

Garrett

Really fun opening! I think the drunken spirit version could lead to a really funny adult comedy type of show. My (perhaps wrong) assumption is that the person who's associated with the drunken spirit wouldn't appreciate that presence, but it's hard to tell in the illustration what exactly the guy's emotion is. Perhaps that's one thing that could be made more clear?

Diego

A city powered by angels is awesome because it opens possibilities beyond science and existence of other unearthly beings!

It makes me wonder how society found the angels and if they captured them, or if the angels are doing it by free will or maybe because a god ordered them to do it.

What might be unclear is if people couldn't live outside of the megatower and why, is there is a problem outside? Are they prisoners of the angels?

Christina

Brainstem, all three ideas are so fun. The giant city would be such a fun world-building process and set design project, and the plasma/primordial soup bubbles would be so cool from a character design point of view. My favorite idea is the drunken spirits, because I think there is clear potential for conflict, emotional arcs, and interesting relationships for your main characters. It makes me wonder—does the person KNOW they have a drunken spirit from the beginning of the story, or do they figure it out over time?

Pietro

My favorite one is the drunken spirit idea. I makes me wonder about the nature of these spirits, I'd love to know more about the world building aspect of it, discover how they interact with humans, learn if they interact with each other. It's unclear to me why his spirit is different and how does a spirit get drunk, is it from a bar in the afterlife? Is this the only person on earth with such a spirit? Great work! Can't wait to learn more about it.

Richard

I feel like your drunken spirit guide is a strong concept with plenty of opportunity for a fun story. I wonder what this sort of world is like and how it came to be this way. I would say I’m not clear how a spirit is able to get drunk though. Is this spirit liquor or is it able to drink real alcohol? Is the human it guides also a drunk or just annoyed by their alcoholic guide? Its these sorts of questions that peak my interest in the story.