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Act 2: Omen vs the Spirits
Omen finally meets the mysterious owner of the apartment.
**Side Note**
Okay, so I tried my best to get the across the message that the "spirits" roaming around the apartment are actually manifestations of the girl's emotions/thoughts. Since the girl is magic (witch), she tends to unintentionally manifest these spirits in her apartment whenever she goes to sleep, kind of like sleep talking. I think there is still room for improvement so if you have any suggestions on how to get that point across visually, I would love to hear them. Thank you!
This is where the special thanks would go! I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.
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