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Aries

this has a really good moral!

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Christopher

Love the art style, I think keeping the main character as the only person in this picture that's detailed. Does this take place in school? A bus? There's not that much in the background so its hard to tell where this is.

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Mason

I like the detail in this image.

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Pengyu

I like the lack of facial expressions in the characters surrounding the protagonist, creating a stark contrast that contributes to the overall message conveyed in this painting.

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Archer

This is a really interesting drawing! If the character created this world where everyone loves her I wonder what she changes about the next world she creates? I am also wondering if her world building is literal or a metaphor. Great job!

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Angelina

The first impression I had when first looking at your illustration is the people around her are making fun of the character. Im interested in seeing why the character would create a world where they experienced judgement from those around them. Great job!

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TJ's World

We are showing our character in the world that she desired. But you need to stay tuned for the whole story to truly see the world she has created at the end- that she should have desired from the start.

This is where the special thanks would go!  I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.

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Team Nanakuli Olelo - Hawaii

Destiny, Jaylee, Nalani, Treasure

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