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Nicole
I really like the world building of how the creatures are extinct and the heroes just end up not appearing because they aren't needed. I find it a bit unclear why no one had a phone or some type of communication with the hero other than when they would randomly appear to help? Also are there no police in this world? I love that the images are super clear and it looks like a fun story I wonder how would it evolve.
Erika
Excellent premise! I love that Renee has such unwavering determination even though all she’s ever known is this world of crime and distortion. You did a good job setting her apart with the unique design and pop of color. The only thing I think could make it stronger is to build up her shock that the uncle has been paying off the criminals. Maybe lean more into how relieved she is that their family has been spared, or have the uncle make up a fake reason before she sees the truth.
Can’t wait to see what happens next!!
Maria Teresa
Please tell me if you are still alive.............hahahah
Maria Teresa
Hi Mary
I think you should be continue with your story. It is very beautiful and interesting, you are going for good way, the world has this part that you are talking about. I hope you give yourself the opportunity to mové on, I realy want to see what you have to herossay, because were I live things like that happens every day and the heros are not around, it's not good idea to give mone to the bad ones and yes, we do not know what to do in this case.
The story board is very strong, the subject make it pwerfull because is real problem for many people.
¡¡¡¡¡¡ Good Job ¡¡¡¡¡¡¡
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Hero Town Act 1
This is the opening act of Hero Town.
This is where the special thanks would go! I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.
Special Thanks:
Team:
Mary FG
Dana, Will
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