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Lucky
my favorite is what if heaven have visiting hours. it brings so much to mind even to think of love ones who have gone there. i wonder how they will look like
Ellie
The one that caught my attention the most was the last what if about heaven having visiting hours. I love the thought of getting to reunite with someone who is missed and also the questions that come out from this scenario. I wonder if there are specific rules to this visiting or if anyone is allowed to visit someone? I also wonder if anyone would break the rules of visiting hours because they don't want to leave their loved one again.
Jim
Favorite is what if heaven had visiting hours. So many interesting directions for this. Makes me wonder what sort of screening one would have to go through to get into heaven to visit someone. Makes me wonder if you can visit whoever you want or whether you can only visit people who you knew or are related to.
Maria Teresa (1 like)
. My favorite "What If" is What If heaven had visiting hours!
. The visiting hours are very nice, it makes me wish to go and visit people that I love.
. In the first What if, I did not understood some words at the begining.
Kim
I like all your ideas! I think my favorite is dinosaurs at night because it's scary! It makes me wonder how actually dangerous it is, and how we live in this world. Or, are they friendly?
Jacquelin
What was your favorite What if Idea and why? What if dinosaurs came to life at night was my favorite. I often wonder about the dinosaurs in the museums and thought the was a great question.
What does it make you wonder more about? I wonder what the dinosaurs would do at night. What would they snack on? Where would they hang out? There are some dinosaur tracks in the park near me and they are only around during some times because of the mud. Maybe the days you can see the tracks are the days they come to life!
Was anything unclear? Everything was pretty clear. I would have some more questions on what was meant by visiting hours I guess it might be something that could be expanded on.
Dino-mite job!
Pietro
The Heaven one is really great! I wonder if the protagonist believes that Heaven is just about following rules and later discovers that when you follow those rules you get to live Heaven on earth, that those rules are actually a recipe for happiness. It was unclear to me the purpose and I think you could include it in the what if sentence, something like "What if Heaven had visiting hours to help humans ________?"
Christopher
I liked the "what if Heaven has visiting hours" question because in such a short question it sets up a world that makes perfect sense. I can already imagine why people would visit and what they'd want to do. It makes me wonder about the people who would want to stay past visiting hours and how they would try to avoid getting caught. It also made me think about what Heaven is like to have "visiting hours". Is it like a retirement home or hospital and you have to sign in or maybe it's more like an amusement park?
Sanchez
The Heaven visiting hours idea really intrigued me! I think a lot of people can relate to wanting to speak with somebody they cannot anymore. To me it is unclear how the whole service would function, but I think there is a lot to explore in the service going wrong, eg someone getting trapped on the wrong side, someone trying to break a family member out of heaven etc.
Richard
I really love the Heaven Visiting Hours idea. I suppose it tugs at my desire to visit lost loved ones, as well. I want to know more about the world where this is possible and how anyone came to find out about it? Who do they want to visit? How does this impact the character’s life after visiting hours?
Constanza
haaha Wow beside loving the diversity of content of concepts in the what if and the wonderful voices, I really got curious the last one! Wow I've though about it as an office but never with visiting hours that was just hilarious! Smart!
What I would love to know is what happens in the meanwhile, if we don't find the right timming or came when it's close. and can anyone go to visit heaven? even the ones who are alive??
Woow I love this so far!
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