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Willy
I love this nice idea and i wonder what happens next.
Alejandro
nice idea, and art. makes me wonder what happens next
Angel
i like the art
Luis
nice idea, I wonder what happens after the plant get the bully
Grace
I love the character. She is unique and has a very interesting personality. It makes me curious as to what comes next! Keep up the good work!
Niccolo
I like how you introduce the character and the art is very good but I do not understand how she knew the flower was magical and why she was bullied.
Braden
I think that this storyreel really does a great job in revealing the personality of the character! I really like the classic storyline of the shy character using some magical force to overcome bullies in her life. I got the sense that this character was lonely, and I think you could add more ways in the visuals and voiceover to show how this character was disconnected from others. Otherwise, amazing!
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Act 1 Storyreel
Minor & major beats!
Creators:
Mackenzie Landsness: Main artist, animations/gifs, creative help
Cam Collman: Portion of art, creative help
Atticus Moore: Narration, story boarding/writing, editing
Thanks to everyone who watched our videos, and to the people who commented creative advice!
Special Thanks:
Team:
M.A.C.
Atticus, Cam, MacKenzie