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  • What did you like or love about this submission?

  • What did you find confusing or unclear?

  • What suggestions do you have to make it stronger?

Luis

The character designs are super cool and interesting and I love the way the world is designed here.

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Natalie

I like the background music a lot. The story reminds me of The Little Mermaid.

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Mónica

I really like your artwork, i suggest adding motion between image transitions to make it more entertaining :)

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Jose

Your artwork is pretty good.

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Jacinta

Love the story so exciting

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Stephanie

omg the cliffhanger! excited to see what comes next!

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Brennan

the whale part why the queen says yes and you should make it so the queen said no

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Odin

I really like the cliff hanger, I find it a little confusing about why everyone got sick, was it natural of was it part of a plot to kill the queen and take power over the whole city? I think you could do that if you wanted a twist.

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Kylie

I like your story line a lot! I would like to see some color in your drawings, and the only thing I found confusing is how did the bubble get there?

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Sanne (1 like)

Your artwork is great and your story is really cool. I think to make this story even better you could clarify that she is going to the surface to find the cure because it was not very clear. P.S: Yes she should open the bottle. One should always open bottles that you find randomly on the ground:)

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Mila

Your story is very captivating and your artwork looks good. The only thing I think is unclear is your character's goal, why does she want to explore the surface and what is she getting from the exploration?

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Act 1and Act 2

This is about a young girl named Viv who is so young and naive that she lets her actions get the best of her sometimes. She lives in a under water city called aqiuva with her family.

Drawing By Zoe
Voice over By Levi

This is where the special thanks would go!  I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.

Special Thanks:

Team:
Levi and Zoe

Levi, Zoe

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