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Luis
The character designs are super cool and interesting and I love the way the world is designed here.
Natalie
I like the background music a lot. The story reminds me of The Little Mermaid.
Mónica
I really like your artwork, i suggest adding motion between image transitions to make it more entertaining :)
Jose
Your artwork is pretty good.
Jacinta
Love the story so exciting
Stephanie
omg the cliffhanger! excited to see what comes next!
Brennan
the whale part why the queen says yes and you should make it so the queen said no
Odin
I really like the cliff hanger, I find it a little confusing about why everyone got sick, was it natural of was it part of a plot to kill the queen and take power over the whole city? I think you could do that if you wanted a twist.
Kylie
I like your story line a lot! I would like to see some color in your drawings, and the only thing I found confusing is how did the bubble get there?
Sanne (1 like)
Your artwork is great and your story is really cool. I think to make this story even better you could clarify that she is going to the surface to find the cure because it was not very clear. P.S: Yes she should open the bottle. One should always open bottles that you find randomly on the ground:)
Mila
Your story is very captivating and your artwork looks good. The only thing I think is unclear is your character's goal, why does she want to explore the surface and what is she getting from the exploration?
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Act 1and Act 2
This is about a young girl named Viv who is so young and naive that she lets her actions get the best of her sometimes. She lives in a under water city called aqiuva with her family.
Drawing By Zoe
Voice over By Levi
This is where the special thanks would go! I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.
Special Thanks:
Team:
Levi and Zoe
Levi, Zoe
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