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Ani

- I love the arc of the character a positive one (transformation)
- Does the accident change their personality from arrogant to humble?
- I'm waiting to watch more

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Miriam

I really like that story for several reasons: Axel discovers that his boss is cruel because he is only interested in money and how the others forget about him when he does not go out in the ring. Maybe he discovers that his accident was intentional by his boss to eliminate him and replace him with another fighter. Axel The Kangaroo teaches us that people are like a puzzle piece in the hands of others. If you don't fit in, they just take you out and forget about you, like Hudson Hornett in Pixar's Cars!!! I would like to know how the story ends and how he overcomes his misfortune.

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Miriam

I really like that story for several reasons: Axel discovers that his boss is cruel because he is only interested in money and how the others forget about him when he does not go out in the ring. Maybe he discovers that his accident was intentional by his boss to eliminate him and replace him with another fighter. Axel The Kangaroo teaches us that people are like a puzzle piece in the hands of others. If you don't fit in, they just take you out and forget about you, like Hudson Hornett in Pixar's Cars!!! I would like to know how the story ends and how he overcomes his misfortune.

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Jim

I like the choice of a kangaroo because they inherently are thought of as being powerful and sort of fun loving creatures.
Bringing a mafia element is a good contrast to their fun loving reputation as his him being meek on the inside. Curious as how a crippled kangaroo could overcome a powerful mob boss. What trait might he have that he could use to defeat the bad boss.

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Florian

This is such a great idea. I can really imagine how the kangaroo's running a mafia like affaire. But what exactly would he gain by becoming the Mob Boss?

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Nicole

I like the idea of mobsters' Kangaroos sounds fun. I wonder how he will be able to overcome the Mob Boss and if his accident was really an accident or if it was the Mob Boss schemes plans. My only suggestion would be other than having a green jacket maybe Axel could benefit of a a distinction trait like a patch in his clothe or having different type of hat or something that you would be able to distinct him from far away.

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Angelina

Your choice to make the characters in your story kangaroos is original and fun! It will be interesting to see how Axel overcomes his challenges. Great job!

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Axel the Kangaroo

A young kangaroo must learn that strength is more than taking someone on in a fight

Just wanna say thanks to my teammate Seth, who is super creative and hard working and helped keep our production on track. This wouldn't have been made without his partnership, and I am eternally grateful for all he's done in the making of this project.

I'd also like to thank my sister Emily, who though she didn't have time to work on the production with us, gave me all the support and sisterly love I needed to see this through.

Finally, I'd like to thank Dorie, the head of communications at my school for helping to finance registration for our team and for believing in us.

Special Thanks:

Team:
Communist Velocirpators

Abbie, Dorie, Emily, Seth

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