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Anton (1 like)

I love lulu. I like the storyline. The pictures were… interesting. When she’s starving you could make her skinnier.

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Gabrielle

We liked the storyline. We also liked the audio. Maybe you could put your pictures into proportions so the dog is smaller than the humans. What happened to the squirrel? Did it continue on the trail with them or go its separate way?

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Olive

I liked your drawings and storyline, but the drawings keep going from good to stick figure, the pictures keep moving and that’s a little distracting

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Kameron

Nice pictures, nice talking ther is some background noise some of the pictures are blurry

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Tye

Needs to speak louder on some parts,speak clearer on some parts, it’s a good story, typos guys made the speaking parts equally

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Reid

I like how loud you were but I think you could focus on the western expansion you could also crop you pictures

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Katie

I like the storyline and the moral of the story. I think getting rid of the camera moving would help and also maybe show some images instead of speaking

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Ava

I like the drawings, but I think you could adjust the pictures so that you can’t see the writing in them

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Levi

It was good just take better pictures but it was a good story.

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Taylor

I like the idea of the squirrel and dog. I think you should add more to the story, like where are they going and why

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Natalie

You should take of the moving on the pictures so you can see it better. You good at explaining stuff.

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Kacey

I like how you have a lot of different pictures and your storyboard was good. I think you could have maybe made sure you could see no words in the back.

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Colin

It was good but you can get rid of the effect of the camera moving

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Kervin

the idea is very good

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Oscar

I like how the story is original and fresh and it is based on the dog and not a human! really good!

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Steven

Very odd yet original storyline, I like it!

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Lulus Adventure

Act 1 2 and 3

This is where the special thanks would go!  I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.

Special Thanks:

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Team 23

Camden, Mataya, Tiffany

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