Aaron

very good story and nice fairy drawing.

Gabriella

this is a good story line. We have a fairy in our story as well.

Max

interesting story. what made her realize that the why was wanted more? like that artwork too.

Sophia (1 like)

I like this story spine! The idea of fairies delivering dreams is fun! But, I wonder, why is the new way of delivering dreams better? What is the old method like, and why is it not as good? Are the older members saying "do it the normal way" just because that's how they think it should be done, or do they have a reason? What if communicating with the humans reveals to people that fairies do exist? What if the fairies need to stay hidden? You have an awesome story idea, and your moral is inspirational!

Ava (1 like)

I like your moral and your storyline, I haven't heard it [the storyline] anywhere before! The drawings are really descriptive. I'm wondering why Gilda was promoted to a Squad Leader and what inspired her to use dreams to help humans? And at the end, how did she get Mary, the oldest Squad Leader to join them? Was Mary curious? Was Mary trying to prove that Gilda was wrong but ended up seeing that she was right? Overall, I really like the storyline and the drawings! I'm excited on how this is going to turn out!

Story

Thank you! All of those are great questions and I'll keep them in mind as I keep developing the story