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Carlos
It is a very interesting story
Ian
I like the idea of this dangerous fuel being crazy, the animation is also good. How did Tristen freeze if he did not touch any oil? I think adding a voiceover will make the video stronger.
Amelia
Your artistic style was very cool! Keep up the good work!
Seneca
I really like your idea and how you presented it, I'm excited to she your overall board
Kyla
I really like your style of multi media presentation. Although the main character stopped the people in the factory from making ice oil, what will stop the boss from turning everything back on after the main character turns into ice? But I'm looking forward to seeing your story completed.
Gael
I love the animation and the story sounds and looks good overall.
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Story Spine
*EPILEPSY WARNING FOR VIDEO*
Also there is music to go along with video
Our character Tristen is a photographer who is greedy for money. The year is 2050 the human race has discovered a new fuel type which is called ice oil. The new fuel is better than regular oil but has a effect that it turn everything to ice.
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Bryce
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