Allie

I love the idea of humans actually being the ghosts! I can see a lot of comedy resulting from this scenario. Most people are afraid of the concept of ghosts but imagine if they found out they were the thing they feared this whole time! I think we'd need to know more about how this happened. How have all humans decided that they're not ghosts when really they are?

Jim

All very interesting but like the ghosts and the live people switching places because it could ask a lot of deep questions like what defines "life." Makes me wonder whether the live people scare the ghosts in this reality?

Mel

Interesting ideas! I like the idea of a cyborg being stuck inside a clock maker's body, and it's fun to imagine her reactions as she goes through the motions of putting together analog clocks. Will she find it difficult or exciting to be in this new body? How do you think the pirate element will play a role?

Brandon

I like the general idea behind your second pitch, but I feel like you will need to elaborate on terms like "alive" and what the cycle of life means for it all.

Belen

I loved the second one, It reminds me of the film The others, However in this case in a humor climate. I find it a bit confusing how this universe It's going to be, I would do a strong presentation of this place at the first minutes/seconds of the story.

Ashley

I like the second idea. Why are the ghosts real but humans not? Did the humans evolve into ghosts after death or ghosts evolve into humans?

Fiona

Your first idea has some potential for a great story. I’m wondering why the government would want to do this. Is he a weapon of some kind? What fox features do they find beneficial?