Anna

I loved it! It made me fall in love with Sebas and Mau in just a few minutes, the story was moving, the characters (especially Sebas) well defined and the moral clear and not patronizing. I don't have any suggestions, but I think the video ended accidentally too soon, the audio was cut abruptly at the end. Good job!

Richard (1 like)

Nice job wrapping this story. I was wonder how Sebas would turn at the end and you did a great job of helping him make the transition to accepting things don't have to be perfect to be good. The only thing that stick out for me is why the don't make another batch. Is it that Sebas only had just enough ingredients for one batch or was it that the competition was in a few hours and he only had time to make one batch. I feel like integrating something like that might amplify the stakes and Sebas's fall when it all turns out bad. Other than that, I think this is great. You could add a few more panels to reduce the need for narration as well as a bit of icing on the story reel (pun intended and I'm not ashamed. LOL) Great work Team Blue Pearls.

Maria Teresa (1 like)

Hi Blue Pearls

The story is very beautiful and empathetic, the narration is super good. It is very clear to me, it is kind and punctual. Your drawings are nice and everything has to do with it, it is understood well.........so I don't know waht else I would give for it to be something else to add, something to it to be better about the story board, or another stof, at the momento I can't think in something. I guess Pixar should give us feedback on this point, which is more detail that must be observe and I don't have the elements, I don't know much about, even if a really want to contribute.
Good job, congratulations.

Julie (1 like)

Your additions are perfect! I love what you have done with the story and the visuals! The video did clip out at the very end while you were finishing the narrative. The only suggestion I have is to maybe have another visual as you finish speaking at the end instead of the black screen?? The boys hugging, or doing something together maybe?? Great job on this story!! It is so well done and wonderful. Makes me smile and want to hang out with those boys!