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Anna
I like your ideas! They all remind me of movies I've seen, so I would love to see what makes these stand out. What is unique to this? What makes you passionate about it?
Palikūokane
The stopping time idea really intrigued me, I am wondering if anyone can stop time or just the main character?. The swapping bodies idea is cool too. It would be interesting to see if your main character and their parents would have to live a day in the other's life. It could be cool to see if by doing this they get newfound respect and understanding for what the other does and has to overcome.
Lauryn
I really love your third idea. I think it'd be interesting to see the duality between the child's life and the parents!
Levi (1 like)
Nice questions but it needs some adding on
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This is where the special thanks would go! I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.
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