Mauricio

Hi tema. I love the use of the line and the colors you chose to portray this character, what´s confusing to me is if we´re looking at two characters at the same time, or is some kind of montage in time? It feels like two different settings. My suggestions is to show only one location where the characters are staged clearly.

Jacquelin

Love this drawing and the planets on the top are a nice touch. I enjoyed the split screen.

Karen (1 like)

Hello! I love the use of color in this submission! I also like how you create two planes on the right drawing with the use of the furniture and how can you tell that these two characters have opposite personalities. Maybe to make the left part stronger, you could use a different angle like a low angle shot that could make the character seem more powerful.

Dan (1 like)

Like: The narrative is quite clear of what character lives in what world. I like on the Heart, the paintbrush in the front that jumps out after the character.
Unclear: Not that you can't watch something on your laptop if you love art, but I'm a little confused why Heart is watching something on the computer and not exploring the other interests of art or space (from the planets above).
Suggestion: I would not have the character be on the laptop (unless that is important for your narrative obviously. The laptop feels like something Mr. Brain would be more obsessed with. Also, I think you can define in the story, but I would want it to be clear why art is solely a Heart thing (the answer since unlikely to make as much money), since art is certainly a brain stimulating endeavour so I would think a Mr. Brain would also like it.

Dhvani (1 like)

Nice to visit your team gallery again. Nice depiction of the characters - Mr. Brain in their world of $$$; and Heart lost in the world of art. The use of colors in the visuals seems well thought of. Curious what's going on in the mind of Heart at this time? From the looks of it, seems lost in deep thoughts and somewhat disconnected in his comfort space? Hope to visit again next week. All the best.