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The Shadow's Bazar
ONCE UPON A TIME there was a novice merchant in the shadow's bazar her name was Zala;
EVERY DAY the Bazar appeared where there was a soul lost in the desert;
BUT ONE DAY a misterius pilgrim saved the lost soul, stealing Zala's first bargain;
BECAUSE OF THAT Zala ask herself if ther was another way to save the lost souls;
BECAUSE OF THAT the other merchants told her horrible stories about the pilgrim and that he was their terrible enemy;
BECAUSE OF THAT Zala worked harder and harder to save all the lost souls;
BECAUSE OF THAT when the pilgrim reappered she followed him out of the Bazar;
UNTIL FINALLY she realized she was the illusion herself;
EVER SINCE THAT DAY Zala learnd to live under the light of the sun far from the shadow`s Bazar illusions;
THE MORAL OF THE STORY IS THE MORAL OF THE STORY IS that there are no easy trick to face difficulties if not go throught them, only you can save yourself Can you?
This is where the special thanks would go! I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.
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Anna, Eleonora, Matteo, Veronica
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