Week 2, by Jiwoo :)
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Hi, my name is Stella!
I have fluffy blonde hair with star highlights on! My mom says that all my imaginations come from this fluffy cloud-like hair. Usually, I have my smiles on so that I can fit in. I like telling stories to people, which I have written down with my “lucky pencil”.
Actually, my Dad gave it to me before he left us, but I guess we can talk about that later. Anyways, it is the only pencil with which I can organize my thoughts.
Without it, I can’t even write a single word.
On the inside, I always have some anxiety about:
1) making wrong choices
2) How my friends may leave me
3) The idea that my mom does not truly love me
(she seems to be sooo busy all the time!)
I want to win this year’s Okayville Writing Competition so that I can take a step closer to my dream of becoming a REAL writer.
BUT, I have a little problem with my perfect plan, which is....
I HAVE LOST MY “LUCKY PENCIL!”
Btw, I doooo need to learn how to make choices.
I always depend on someone/something to make THE RIGHT choice for me.
Music by: Monkeybgm https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZKE8v8IgpfY
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