Jo's toy bone
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Once upon a time there was a dog named jo he liked to play with his toy bone everyday but one day he lost it so he went to go find it in all the places he had played with it played with it with. He went to the park then the pool and lastly his backyard but it was know where to be found . Till a nut fell on his head he looked up to see a squirrel the squirrel said that she saw a crow flew into his window and took his bone Jo was shocked about the story of his bone got stolen from a crow but happy it was found so the squirrel tossed it back to Jo and Jo was happy the moral of the story is to not leave your things unintended or it will be stolen.
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