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This is a copy of my Act 2 script: (skip to 1:17 if you just want Act 2 :D)

Once they made it to the little girls mamas house, Fynn immediately told his parents that he remembers the way back home and they can all go back home together that night. However, since his parents tell him that neither of them have enough strength to make it, fynn decides to mail letters back and forth. That way, he can reassure the fireflies at home that he and his parents are okay. At first they didn’t know how they’d write letters but they decided to use flower petals at paper, create mud for ink, and take thin grass to tie the letter all together. So with the hat and satchel fynns mother made for him as well as the letters his parents wrote, he goes off in his journey. Although the journey included many dangers, He safely made it back before daylight and even got to see the beautiful night sky as well as hang out with the fireflies like Ryder back home for a couple hours. Bc of that however, the other bugs that lived at the little girls mamas house started hearing abt fynns mail delivery service and asked him to mail letters for them to the same park, since they were also taken from there similar to Fynn and his parents. At first fynn didn’t rly want to deliver their mail but decided he should since that’s the “right thing to do.” Plus in a way he sympathized w them in the hopes to communicate w family so that made Him want to deliver for them more. Luckily majority of the bugs he started to deliver for were very nice so fynn was willing to do even farther trips for them as a thank you. However Bc of that, fynn starts to experience burnout. He isn’t able to help his parent as much as he used to, isn’t able to visit Ryder in the middle of flights, and overall isn’t his fun spunky energetic self. Instead now he’s become a mindless zombie jsut saying yes to any request given to them

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