Please provide final feedback to the creators of this submission below:
What did you like or love about this submission?
What did you find confusing or unclear?
What suggestions do you have to make it stronger?
Add a Title
Add a Title
Feedback will appear below after our team moderates them.
Your content has been submitted
2) What you think about this submission:
Replying to text
An error occurred. Try again later
Your changes have been saved. If you uploaded a new video, it make take some time to render and be moderated. Please check back shortly and be sure to refresh your page.
Its name is:
On the outside:
It looks CARBONIZED, broken, fatigued, ill, hunched and skinny.
On the inside it is:
Hard worker, idealistic and caring, also stubborn, explosive and incendiary.
What it wants most is:
To be the strong, healthy frog it was BEFORE its burn-out
What stops it from getting what it wants:
is being extremely alert on any possible comeback of a tornado causing it huge stress and fatigue.
What it needs to learn is:
That he won't recover its old health and strength at all, its physicality won't be the same and will be limited but by taking care of its basic needs consciously, he will be transformed, it will feel fulfilled and be reborn with new strengths and new health.
The thumbnail is optional and appears on your video preview on the gallery page.
Submission for Week
Do you need closed captions? Please follow these instructions.
Please tell us how compelling you felt this story was. Take into consideration the use of visual storytelling, character development and story structure. This information will not be shared with anyone.