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Once upon a time there was a little girl named Clara. Every day she walked to school and photographed plants for her journal. Until one day she found a small flower in the garden and defended it from a group of bullies trying to stomp on it. She yelled for them to stop, and the plant lashed out and grabbed the bullies. Because of that she felt guilty for hurting the bullies and felt scared and alone. Because of that, a young boy named Luca reached out to her and comforted her. They befriended each other and shared their interests. Because of that the plansT got jealous of her, grabbing both the friend and the bullies. She then freed her friend and retreated. Until finally, she decided to choose people over plants and killed the plant with weed killer, freeing the bullies.
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