Pengyu

I really love the sound effects and any other background music as they worked perfectly with your drawings and storyline. However, the lack of narration makes me to hard to follow the story. I think adding the narration into the movie could definitely provide a more clear perspective of the story.

Natalie

I really like all of the sound effects, however, I'm lost when it comes to the story. I can understand the basic sequence of events, yet I am left with a lot of questions. Why did the first cowboy almost shoot the horse or go to the shootout? Why was there a shootout? Was the man that was shot inside the hospital? I also don't see the moral. I think asking "why did this happen" for each scene would immensely help with fleshing out the story.

Quang Khai

it is really good

Carlos

I like how you started off with the story.. good job :))

Ella

Great job! I agree, I think that you could elaborate more on your story. Your sound effects are great!

Eamon

I feel that the lack of a narration, or any dialogue leads to a confusing story.

Eamon

I'm sorry, I had made a mistake, my audio settings were messed up. I would elaborate more on the story.