Tea

I like how the story was about unity.

The artwork could have been a little more sharp and defined but showed multiple styles

A story involving Family unity is inspiring

Matthew (3 likes)

I like the creativity on display here, clearly there are many story ideas for Kirk! I'm confused by the world that is presented as the setting for this story. A suggestion might be to break this story into several smaller stories, and spend a bit more detail explaining this world. Super creative, your imagination is really strong!

Jason

hard for me to understand the live captions. Best to burn in the subtitles yourself, so the timing and etc can be controlled.

Jordan (3 likes)

I like the idea of another universe being contained within ours, and that the world isn't too differen't from ours, except for a few key factors, like that there are talking cats that live in normal society. I like the story of purpose and wanting to do more with your life as the main character does. For the second planet I think it could be implied that it's in a crystal ball since holding a gas that's a second universe seems less practical. I also like the idea of the suns getting brighter the more good he does, kinda a sweet alagory for a superhero origin story. The main character is named kirk like the captain from Star Trek TOS, nice touch. I'm a bit confused on what the smaller universe and the significance of it was, but overall I enjoyed it!