Anna (1 like)

I really like how you used a double immage to show the dichotomy of Cian! The colors you chose to use in the background really show the emotions that he feels for the worlds he lives in! I really like the use of the mask in the picture on the right as a narrative tool, but I wish the first one had a similar item as well. The cellphone he holds makes it a little bit unclear if the first picture is set on a full "digital world" or a fantasy-style real one, in my opinion.

Sara (1 like)

I have been fascinated by the strength of the color and the drawing of this story. Is incredible! I would very much like to know which of the two images represents the metaverse (if the first, idyllic bottom of the sea), or the second (more dystopian). And I wonder if that cool character will fight to make the real world equal to or better than the virtual metaverse. It's a super inspiring story. I love it, can't wait to see how it goes!

Ally (1 like)

I really love the use of colors in these illustrations, it has an electric feel to it and you have a great eye for color! Cian seems to be immersed in a very versatile universe, where some areas welcome exploration and others are more on the hazardous side. The foggy, vibrant green color in the right image really gives a feeling of danger, but also excitement. It makes me curious and want to see more of what the land/terrain looks like, and where the green haze is coming from. The only unclear point for me was the name "The Metaverse." Does this mean that Cian's world is all digital? I ask this because it seems as though Cian's world is very real, and there is a need for caution. Overall, I really like your art style and your vision for Cian's world :-)!

Tara (1 like)

Great use of color, it is scary picture with the mask and the we can assume a tube with air to the mask. Maybe it provides a feeling that most people really don't want to think about right now because we all want the time of masks to be gone. I wonder why the phone in the hand?

Anastasia (1 like)

Hello! I love how your team drew Cian in both the metaverse and the physical world. The color schemes visualize the mood and the character’s disposition in each world. I’m intrigued by both of these worlds. Is the metaverse similar to virtual reality? I suggest possibly adding more contextual information into the physical world. Is it a dystopian wasteland or neglected from everyone escaping into the metaverse? Great job!