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Jackson
This is awesome
David
This is awesome! I love the simplicity and how easy the story is to follow. The drawings really pair well with the narration so I can tell what being the alien, and the human must have been like. I would recommend clearing up the motives a little bit. Why did the Jupiter aliens want to come to Earth? That would make the story a lot more engaging and give them things to work towards. I love the relationship between the aliens and the humans, and how the humans slowly come to accept the aliens as their friends. Great Work!
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This is where the special thanks would go! I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.
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Abdulla, Aisa, and Sogey
Abdulla, Aisa, Sugey
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