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Averie
Zoom out on the pictures. Good job talking loud.
Grace
Great job! Good ideas and drawings! Compelling story as well.
Ben
Even though I marked this under "has potential", this honestly is pretty good, just not very good. The premise is nice and simple, and the basic structure is well-written, but I wish the story was a bit cleaner. For example, immediately after he starts giving away some of his money, the next line states that he's starting to hoard it. Also, the whole "three jobs" thing is a bit of an over-the-top concept for an otherwise pretty grounded story. But it's not bad, far from it. I just think it can be a bit better.
Kervin
good work
Marco
I like the story
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Derek and The Money Tree
Friends and Family over Money
This is where the special thanks would go! I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.
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Brennan, Odin
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