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Ricardo
Very clear presenting voice!
Quang Khai
I like the way you present it
Story
That was really good! I like how you presented the native Americans and pilgrims in a neutral way, it felt more historically accurate than some I've seen. Great job! I liked the music too.
Amy (1 like)
I liked the montage of pictures at the beginning - it really helped develop the characters. I was a little bit confused about where this new land was and what they moral or message it. I suggest the middle move a little faster!
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Pilgrims
Pilgrims
This is where the special thanks would go! I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.
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Kamie Bennett Shyan Preston
Bennett, Kamie, Preston
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