Javier

I love how you represent death, and how his just doing around. Also the part of the nurse was powerful in the sense on he hasn't seen anything like that, and that makes death to pay attention to that.

Eleonora

I love that the angel loses it's inspiration and became the classic death,
I hope to see more funny gag like the man that fall from the wall, XD!

Pietro

I really love your concept and the visuals, the looking into the candles and how universal and epic your story is. I also love that there is a theme of needless loss of life. I also love the way your protagonist tries to detach to cope with the burden of his mission. I suggest telling the inciting incident in a more personal way and beat by beat, maybe starting with the story of the person who was supposed to die, then she irrupts into the story. The only thing that was confusing to me is how exactly the flame works. You have a really great high concept idea and I can't wait to watch your next submission.

Carol

Beautiful artwork. I love howthe story is told from the POV of the main character. It's very well written and shown. I am very intrgued "hooked" by the end of act 1. Very well done.

Seth

I love coming from the grim reaper's perspective, especially as we can see his indifference shift to fascination or even admiration as he keeps talking. It's sort of a necessary contrivance that one nurse was able to sorta "break the rules" of the candles. I think once heard a pretty good word of advice, which is that every story is allowed one big contrivance, and that's the one that gets the ball rolling—which is exactly what's happening here!