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Palikūokane (1 like)
Great ideas! My favorite was the lying one, it would be cool to see if the marks would be enough of a deterrent for people to not lie and how would that change our society? and does society look down/harass people with marks? also, would the marks be different sizes based on the severity of the lie, or are they all treated the same?
Ian (1 like)
I like the idea of humans learning magic, I wonder if it would be used for good or for evil more. What do you mean by marks in the second one, branding?
Dylan
My favorite idea is the final one. For the first one humans can already learn magic just not the kind you describe. What do you mean by marks in the second what if video
Charles (2 likes)
Good drawings. I was unclear on what magic. You should create drawing for the different types of magic. Or make drawings of a Society full of cloud pets
Erin
I think the drawings are really good but you could put a little more details in it but besides that everything looks good
Kila
My favorite is the clouds are going to be our pet
Matthew
I really enjoyed these amazing ideas. But I think it would be adorable to see humans owning clouds. I think you can do so much with this idea. I can't wait to see what idea you choose and how you go about it. -Matt
Braden
I really enjoyed the idea of clouds being people's pets. I wonder if the clouds could think for themselves. I found it a little unclear about who or what the humans were learning magic from.
Nightshade (1 like)
My favorite was the first one because I like magical stories. I wonder what you would feed the pet clouds. I didn't think anything was unclear.
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