Nathan

nooo way this is an awesome you are so creative

Dylan

I liked the amination that you used and thought that it was a well-written story. It was unclear as to what those blue blob things were though. I think you could have made it better by doing the voice-overs with multiple takes because I could tell that you were having trouble with your lines at some points in the video.

Chris

Hi! I thought this story was very entertaining, and that it had a lot of themes of a classic adventure story with some unique twists, which is awesome. However at some points I found the plot a little confusing to follow, and a little disorganized. There were many elements which should have been adressed further, or cut out for timing purposes (would have been better if we had a longer time to delve into everything). That being said, I did really enjoy seeing your interpretation of a purgatory! It was a unique perspective that was interesting to see.

Kelvin

I like that you put a lot of emotion into your voice acting, but you could have potentially gave your character more poses