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Olivia
I love the way you portrayed the people's faces. I would love to see more of how and why Carl began to lie. Great work!
Mattie
I like this idea and the world in which the story takes place. My question is what makes Benjamin a liar?
Pedro
why does he lie? serious question think about it
Bertha
Nice
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Cool plot! My only question is, how did Carl get the ability to lie?
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Act 1: Benjamin the Liar
Benjamin sees himself in his friend
This is where the special thanks would go! I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.
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Team Cooper
Cooper, Lila, Tyler
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