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Christian
i like you idea
Christian
nice
Steven (1 like)
Really cool artwork, it looks like an actual cartoon!
James
And that's my real intentions of this short, a cartoon.
Olivia (2 likes)
The pictures were well made. Great work!
Ricardo (1 like)
The art is so well done, and the narration is very good
Emily (1 like)
I like the narration and I also love the drawings.
Sam (2 likes)
the characters are very well drawn, the narration is good but can be confusing near the end
Kevin (1 like)
I like the narration and the drawing look great
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Roommates Act 1 & 2
Act 1 is where we are introduced to Ivan and his struggles. Act 2 is where Ivan is now living with Layla and his time with her is ... Well let's just say that whenever a good thing happens to Ivan a bad thing will follow, then again that's not always the case.
(sorry that It was late)
This is where the special thanks would go! I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.
Special Thanks:
Team:
Team A
James
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