Dylan

I like how the lighting was used to show the cave getting dark creating a vanishing point.

Jayla

i love the detail and the color its amazing

David

I like the detail on Joshua as I can really feel like I can see his emotion. I can tell his is curious about the new scenery and how he is timid but adventurous. I would love some more background information on why he has experienced so much trauma and how that affects his actions in the present. How does he have clothes? How tall is he? How will he overcome his emotional obstacles in order to become mentally stable and sane? I suggest you give him a headband and also make his best friend a hammerhead shark.

Cam

I really like your use of perspective in this frame. I really like how you used the light shining into the cave to highlight the character.

Owen

Nice perspective

Quinn

i like the shading and use of shadow and color. your character seems unique and cool

Megan

I liked the perspective, and the shading and lighting. You may want to add someone in the background because it looks like it’s in a desert so maybe a cactus

Andrew

Jeane is drawn nicely, and I like the texture going on in the rays of light. Sadly, I don't know how to aid him in his battle against the big fish (or help him cope with not being able to fight the big fish). Maybe the cave could be more foreboding if the rocks looked more jagged (if that's the vibe you're going for).