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Lydia
Hello, Team Ace-- these are some ace ideas! Our team especially likes the first and last ideas. The first idea with the vampire influencer sounds super fun, the completely different life idea feels like it could dig a lot deeper! I wonder if the vampire is influencing others to become vampires... or is just an influencer who happens to be a vampire? Is the stolen gem of life affecting life as we know it? Does the completely different life belong to someone else, or is a unique and new different life? Perhaps their life and memories were swapped with one another? Can't wait to see what your team does next! -- Lyd + Team LL Cool J :)
Jalen
The third idea is my favorite. I wonder if the main character will be happier or not with her new life. Will she ever go back to her old life? Does she disappear from her first life when she wakes up in the next one? Are the two lives she lived in different time periods, or does she wake up in the next life the day after the first life? Also, I love the pink/blue hair style of the main character
Julie
I love the idea of waking up to a different life. I think many people have wondered what it would be like to be in a different life, usually thinking it would be better. There are so many possibilities with this type of story. I wonder what it would be like ... Good? Bad? Would you want your old life back? If you would forget your old life completely, does that change the experience? It is unclear what the new life would be, how the person would feel about it and if it was a temporary or permanent situation. Very intriguing idea!
Brennan
The third prompt of waking up in a completely different life is exciting! Having life as you know it being taken away, and slowly using your memory of your past life is scary and intriguing. It is unclear as to how the new life differs. Is it better or worse? Does the protagonist want to get home? If so, you will have to explain the method of traveling to a different life, which could dampen the "magical" aspect of the prompt, but it wouldn't ruin the story by any means. I can't wait to see where this goes!
Emma
My favorite What If idea would be the vampire influencer idea because I like the thought that an immortal being would put themselves out there on the internet. It makes me wonder if they eventually become sick of being an influencer because they can live so long. If they lived for hundreds of years or if something they did a century ago would make them canceled in the future? What is unclear is if they keep their vampirism a secret or not.
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