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Ahsirp (2 likes)
I LOVE IT! This entire piece is amazing! It has all the elements of a story, them being rising action, climax (the expression on his face after he kicked zelv of the bridge was priceless), and the falling action, where we see zelv has overcome his fear of heights and wants to zipline. It is also very funny and exhibits the most excellent voice acting. I especially enjoyed the actor for the qwertill who threw the grenade off the cliff. They were extremely talent. Hats off to them.
Ahsirp (2 likes)
Sorry I meant talent. They were also extremely talented. In the second to last sentence.
Eva (2 likes)
I like it, watched it for the eight time heh
Brit (1 like)
Just wanted to say a huge bravo from the Story Xperiential Team. You should be immensely proud of this project.
Kyleigh
I love the music and sound effects! and the animation is amazing!
Mattie
This is one of my favorite submissions I have seen. Everything was awesome and amazing! I loved the story, the animation (the art was incredible), the sound effects, it all went together really well. Amazing job!
Alan
I like the fact that this video is animated it shows that you put a lot of effort on it.
Bertha
Great job its very good
Niccolo
Great Job its very good and well made I also like how it has sound effects and dialogue
Sarah
Great sound effects, angle shots and animation. It was a simple story with a lot of animation. I enjoyed every minute of it.
Teagan
OMG THIS IS SO AMAZING IT CAN'T BE MORE AMAZING!!! YOU ANIMATED THE WHOLE THING?!?!?!?!?!?! WOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!! Just next time, make the aliens all different colors, but that might have been a time crunch.
Solomon
I really like how simple the story is, with the aliens looking real cute and the sound effects added for the world. I was a little confused on which characters were which, as the designs of most of the aliens were the same, so it was hard to tell some of them apart, but otherwise, great job!
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All those late hours are finally paying off. Now I wish I had a teammate. . . .
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Enjoy this short film about an alien who learns to overcome his fear of heights.
--Nikitha
Thanks to Gautham, Keeran, Eva, and Prisha, who had no idea what they had volunteered their voice acting for but did it anyway. A special thanks to Rithika, who mastered the deep-voiced Kei and was rather excited to see the final film and what characters I would play.
You can find all these people in the credits for voice acting. :)
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Nikitha
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