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Krista (1 like)
This is beautiful, you inspired me to start animating again. Thank you so much! I love your art and story.
Ana (2 likes)
I LOVE THE ANIMATION!! Seriously, the perspectives here and the whole grocery scene was really nicely done. It's cool what you can do with flipaclip :) You also managed to express a lot in such a short video. The only complaint I have is the abrupt ending. That's all, though. I did really like it!
Manea-Joy
Thank you so much for noticing detail and thank you for the feedback!! That means so much to me
Mónica (2 likes)
I really like your story, great job :)
Jose (2 likes)
Simple and amazing!
Angel (2 likes)
i like the art
Sam (2 likes)
The animation was great and showed emotion it was awesome good job
Henry (3 likes)
First of all, the animation is great. Not only is it smooth, but it also shows a lot of emotion. The story is very creative and interesting. It being a little longer would be nice though.
Jan Carlo (2 likes)
I like the animation and use of audio
Keya (2 likes)
i love the concept of the story! it's really unique and cool, and i like how you used the name "Melody" and the musical term "melody" to add meaning to ur story! also the animations are really well done!! great jobb
Manea-Joy
You have no idea how much that means to me thank you so much
Keya
of course!! i really loved the story so much :))
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A melody
Story about a 16 year old girl named Melody who’s just going through another day of her life and buying groceries her mom wants her to buy Through out her day she hears things differently For in this world she lives in there’s no such thing as music
She makes a new friend on the way And they write a song together and call it after her name.. a melody
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