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Averie
Good speaking. Zoom out on the pictures.
Ben
Not bad at all, but the story doesn't have a clear direction. There's no character arc or anything, and the story just ends abruptly before he can save his home. I still enjoyed it, but I wish it had more overall cohesion. It's still good for what it is, though.
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