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Ana
I really like the style! The whole color scheme is nice to look at. I appreciate Klara's character exposition as an artist/content creator! The other thing that really stands out to me is the message. I feel like this is a very important life lesson, and it was communicated effectively. I would've liked to see more of the resolution, though. Nice work :-)
Kyleigh
I like the fact that this story is about uncertainty and fear of the future. Nothing was really unclear to me except why was Karas's face on the cookie box. I also think nothing about this story needs to be stronger I think it's idea was explained well!
Stephanie
masterpiece
MacKenzie
I love the color consistency and the story, It was a little hard to understand how she felt about the cookies though, did she freak out a little when she saw the box? how did she react at first when eating the cookies?
Gabriella
Love this
Jesse
Great storyboard. Like the cool colors.
Joaquin
What a wonderful stroryboard, full of life witha that shading and colour palette. The story is nice but I would prefer if it was telled only with the drawings and the music. But in the end it is an awsome work and I really like it.
Mónica
I really like your story and your artwork :)
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Kara Final Video
Kara finds an interesting way to see into the future, and becomes obsessed with it.
This is where the special thanks would go! I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.
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Team:
Greer Nakadegawa-Lee
Greer