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Colin (1 like)
Nice drawings and a good story
Jack (1 like)
The story felt very complete and the artwork was amazing, I think that the story would have been stronger if you had read the script with more emotion. I think that it would have made the story more interesting and would have added more tension to moments that needed it. Overall great story.
Alejandro (1 like)
amazing art
Quang Khai (1 like)
the artwork is amazing
Jesse (1 like)
Very compelling story.
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Amaya finds a kitten in the old house they move into, and takes the time to raise her back to full health while bonding along the way. However, their housing is temporary, and soon Amaya and her mother will have to move to the city. Amaya’s mom says that Raven cannot come with them. Because of this Raven is left behind after Amaya fails to try to sneak her with them, and the two must find a way back to each other. Amaya will learn to gain confidence in herself and be more open with her emotions, while Raven will learn to get over her fear of being alone.
Thanks to the crew who set up this learning experience for all of us, I was very grateful to be able to learn the structure and process behind storyboarding. This definitely helped me figure out how to construct a meaningful story with a moral, and have it be interesting for the reader. So, thanks again, and I'm glad I was able to be a part of this! 💛
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Me, Myself, and I
Maddie
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