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Caden
Very good drawing. A little hard to hear over the music
Jak
The art is great, you don't need much to still tell a good story. The music is played all around, in some parts it just doesn't fit like in act 2 and the princess was dead.
Romel
I think it needs a little more details
Oscar
The art is nice but I think you could've made the pictures more clear with better lighting but that's just me. I don't understand why the witch lives so close by. Nice story.
William
I liked the story! The art is nice, but I think it could have used some cropping. I am a little unclear about why the witch lives so close by. Great story!
Roen
This is quite a nice story, I liked that you kept it simple.
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THE PRINCESS AND THE WITCH
The story is all about a princess and a witch who later decided to bewitch the princess because of envy but later the princess is back to normal.
.I would like to say thank you on behalf of my team members for everyone who have assisted us to think deep and also inspired me to my creative journey .May god bless you for there is a wise saying that says
"ANY JOB WORTH DOING IS WORTH DOING WELL."
Special Thanks:
Team:
bright minds.
Joseph, Raphael, Simone
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