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Kamie
I like your ideas
Mya
Your drawings are so good and I can under stand your story good.
Aisa
this story is very cool
Josie
I think your video was great!
Harris
I think this needs some improvement with the actual story, i found it confusing how they all came back in the end and were all fine. Where did the humans go, and what was the moral of the story
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Final Story Thing
This is our second-to-final draft if I'm not mistaken! Luckily, this didn't take fifteen different tries to upload, so that's great!
This is where the special thanks would go! I’m assuming they will be a little longer this week, therefore, I designed extra space for them. If there is far more description and special thanks then there is space, this entire box becomes scrollable.
Special Thanks:
Team:
AMB
Aries, Ben, Malia, Tyler
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