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Frank
I really like the character Dre the Trash Monster. It was unclear why Dre and his friend venture to a new city. Are they in search of something? Are they running from something? Great work on the drawings.
John-Charles
There's definitely something here with the trash planets, but I'm a little confused about what the conflict in the story is? Why is the new city scary? What are they hiding from? How do they become friends? I think finding the threads between the characters could help you get comfortable with playing in this space
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